Thursday, March 25, 2010

A Picture is Worth 55 Words







Getting out of bed is much more difficult than usual.
Falling back into bed, forcing myself to stand up.
Not straightening my hair, too much work today.
Not too much homework, then came Wednesday.
Track practice shortens my homework time,
Tryouts for a softball team,
Retaking a lost test.
I need rest.
Waiting for
Friday.

3 comments:

  1. Jacquerie: Your poem sounds a little like mine!
    Good one! Friday's almost here! Love your picture!!!

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  2. Jackie, your poem is excellent. I liked the way you highlighted some words to stand out. I thought that was very clever. I agree with on the track practice. Good luck with softball. Also it was great that you 9th and 10th lines rhyme. Awesome picture, too. Very good work and have a nice week end.

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  3. I love your poem. Getting out of bed is a hard thing for all of us. We are all tired during the week. I see what you mean about track. I do tennis, so it is 6:00 by the time I get home. Then, I take a shower and eat, so it is 7:30 by the time I start my homework. I'm sure you would be very tired because you must run a lot for track. We have a lot of homework sometimes also. I love how you highlighted certain words in your poem. I also love your picture. Good job.

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